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Kelcey Ervick's avatar

Yes, exactly. So many teachers have harmed so many aspiring artists/writers--and others have truly nurtured them! A pedagogy of positivity doesn't have to mean all praise all the time; it can mean taking someone seriously and believing that they can grow and learn!

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K. Woodman-Maynard's avatar

"I have a pedagogy of positivity." I love that!

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Kelcey Ervick's avatar

Right?! I feel bad that I can't remember the poet's name, but her words have stuck with me!

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Mitchell Volk's avatar

That is so so good!

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Sue Bradford Edwards's avatar

Amen! It is so important to give our students and critique partners tools and turning points vs stumbling blocks.

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Kelcey Ervick's avatar

Yes! I would have loved a lesson on line breaks!

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Sue Bradford Edwards's avatar

I'm sure a number of people would have benefitted from it.

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B.A. Lampman's avatar

Be the professor you'd want to have. YES.

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Kelcey Ervick's avatar

I was also thinking of being a professor like being a doctor: First, do no harm!

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B.A. Lampman's avatar

Again, YES. If only that were true of all teachers and professors 😑

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Kelcey Ervick's avatar

Yep. Sigh.

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Jamal Robinson's avatar

Another wonderful dose of creative inspiration 🥰

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Kelcey Ervick's avatar

Thanks, Jamal!!

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Nancy Reddy's avatar

"pedagogy of positivity"--what a great note to end the semester and the year on!

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Kelcey Ervick's avatar

Yes! Thanks, Nancy. That phrase has really stuck with me!

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AMP's avatar

Another good one. Yes.

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Kelcey Ervick's avatar

Thanks, AMP!

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Rebecca Baugniet's avatar

You sound like a marvellous professor. (Also, I read The Keeper this week and loved it so much and have been recommending it to everyone ever since. Thank you for your art!)

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Kelcey Ervick's avatar

Wow, these are awesome things to hear! Thanks so much, Rebecca! (especially for the "recommending" part! books live on word of mouth!)

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Loralee Clark's avatar

As a writer myself, my motto is to give to every writer I meet--give my journal list, my tips, my feedback--whatever has helped me is what I want to share. Because the writing world IS hard enough; support begets support. Check out my substack if you're inclined--it's always free.

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Kelcey Ervick's avatar

Yes to all of this! I appreciate your generous spirit as a writer! Thanks, Loralee.

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Cindy's avatar

Wow, I need this message as I'm about to grade final projects! I will strive for that pedagogy of positivity, because the world of business is hard enough! Thanks for a great reminder and a great post!

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Kelcey Ervick's avatar

Grading final projects yields such a range of emotions for me! Some students amaze me, others disappoint. But it’s a tough world and we’re doing what we can. I’m sure they will appreciate your positivity!

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Weston Parker's avatar

I tried to send $$, cause yer so awesome but it kept saying I needed to complete "the screen capta". Tell me a simple way to send loot. Wes

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Kelcey Ervick's avatar

Damn, Wes, that is so nice! Screen captas are frustrating and usually super blurry! I appreciate the impulse so much, but you don't have to send me anything!

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Weston Parker's avatar

In this day and age, it's how I tell someone they are doing a good job. If we lived near one another I'd pat you on the back. Talent, hard work and humanity don't often go hand in hand. thank you. BTW, I couldn't even get to the screen capture bit, which, by the way, I am dang good at picking out motorcycles etc.

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Joan Fernandez's avatar

I love unexpected line breaks

too.

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Kelcey Ervick's avatar

Ahh, I see what you did there! 😉

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Joan Fernandez's avatar

Just having fun! And I do love your post.

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Marilyn Graham Werden's avatar

Wow. I am stunned that such a positive writing teacher exists. 👌

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Kelcey Ervick's avatar

Oh dear, it shouldn't be too shocking! Yes, there are lots of discouraging teachers out there, but also so many good ones! Have you encountered more of the former?

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Lex Orgera's avatar

That’s the exact moment to introduce the joy of experimenting with breaking lines . What a nitwit that prof was.

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Kelcey Ervick's avatar

Yes and yes! Sigh.

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Jay Bremyer's avatar

I loved, understood (albeit maybe had a bit of trouble seeing the cranky side get the opportunity to show) and then saw related piece on How You Made Your Student Cry and, wow, just not ready to jump right into that. Cheering you and all you inspire, poems, stories, reports, pics, students ...

on! (Yes, my broken lines are just fine, as are yours, and I'll read the related account now.)

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Myq Kaplan's avatar

dear kelcey,

i like your line

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like your line

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i like you

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